Main Points Taken from Audience Feedback

Key Points in Response to Audience Feedback

We have now watched our audience feedback and these are the main things we have taken out of it:
 

The order, it didn’t seem to flow or tell the story well so we should re-order it so it makes more sense - it was clear most of the audience were confused about plot / relationships.

Add in some action shots, this helps with the pace of the trailer toward the end.

Add music, even though it might not be our final music it still helps with the atmosphere of the piece and it's easier to tell what's working and what isn't.

Take out and cut longer shots, this helps the trailer flow better and also helps with the pace  allowing it to feel a lot more like a trailer.

Re-voice some scenes, some of the dialogue was too quiet and the re-voice will help with the telling of the story.

Add L cuts to help with pace and story telling.
Make sure we establish relationships clearly.