Tuesday, 20 November 2012

Second Rough Cut

Key Changes:

  • Re-ordering to connect events more clearly e.g. making sure all four main characters are introduced clearly
  • Addition of shots to increase pace at end - shots suggesting action and danger
  • Creation of more L-cuts to add pace - adding shots over continuing dialogue
  • Addition of some ADR - revoiced dialogue which suffered from sound issues
  • Addition of rough sound track created for animatic to give sense of music / pace
  • Further cutting of all shots to generate pace and create trailer feel

The ordering of certain shots, such as the first Anonymous X blog post definitely helps the trailer. The use of sound builds the pace. The insertions of pictures into a previously static scene works well. The overlapping dialogue makes it seem more like a trailer. The shots don’t seem as random as in previous versions. There is a bit of narrative with the teachers and suspects. You can tell the relation between Michael and Jess. Faster paced. The hero shot establishes a main connection. Cut down shots so it’s more of a trailer than scenes from a film.

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